Elevator Pitch:
I did not receive much feedback on my previous elevator pitch, but I noticed several things on my own that I improved upon. I recognized that I was not speaking loudly, and I was speaking way too fast to be properly understood. I also realized that I was not explaining my product enough in detail for most people to comprehend its functionality.
After assessing these criteria that I came up with, I took these issues and fixed my presentation to create a better elevator pitch. I spoke louder and slower to pronounce my words. I also went more in depth on how my product worked and what purpose it served. After incorporating these changes to my elevator pitch, I can confidently say this has been my best one yet. You have to become comfortable behind a camera before you can be great at it, and doing this assignment for the third time now I feel I have improved my pitch tremendously.
ReplyDeleteAdam, you did an amazing job on this Elevator Pitch. You dressed professionally, spoke clearly, and used great hand gestures. By watching your pitch, you can easily tell that you have great knowledge of your business concept and that you are passionate about what you are talking about. My only advice is to not sizzle out at the end. You started so strong, but your energy level was not as high at the end of your pitch so much keep that consistent. Over all great job!
Adam,
ReplyDeleteYou presented yourself very professionally in this video. You spoke very clearly and smoothly. I can tell you are passionate about your idea and I hope to see this project grow. You’ve definitely improved from your first pitch, keep it up!